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Posted in Working Mothers on 1st June 2011

i want to improve my english,can you correct this good story?
One day a small girl sat at the kitchen and was seeing her mother which was cooking food.
suddenly, she noticed many white hairs is between hair’s mom. she asked her mother”mom,why many your hairs is white”.?
replied her mother” when you do a bad work , and angried me one my hair become white.
small girl thought and said” i underestand why whole my grand mother became white.

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Answer by MrGuy
One day a small girl sat in the kitchen and saw her mother who was cooking food.

Suddenly, she noticed a lot of white hairs in her mom’s hair. She asked her mother, “Mom, why so many white hairs?”

Her mother replied, “When I do hard work that angers me, my hair becomes white.”

The small girl thought, then said, “I understand why all my grand mother’s hair became white.”

Answer by Simone
One day a small girl was sitting in the kitchen whilst her mother was cooking food.
Suddenly she noticed many white hairs on her mother’s head and she asked her mother
“Mom, why do you have so many white hairs?”
Her mother replied
“When you do bad work and anger me, one of my hairs becomes white.”
The small girl thought and said” I understand now why my grandmother’s whole hair became white.

Whew that was a grammar lesson.

I changed more of it so the sentences made a little more sense.

Answer by suleman
first off all you should learn best manners , learn tact how to tackle small children,when kids ask any questions give him reply smile face so he can more attract towards with you.

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